Hello, guys just another update on my new song I’m writing. ‘Dead Man Walking’ I really hoped you loved the first post I did for this song. Now, the second part aka the verse two. When I wanted to write this part I wanted to capture life as a metaphor but, within a scenario of characters. For example, when I say “Oh, Joan” She is the representation of people or a person who I experienced who will judge you and not believe in your circumstances. And when I say “You should be feeling warm like the sun outside” I’m trying to say that sometimes life doesn’t understand why a person can suffer from anxiety or mental health frustrating and forcing the character to be okay. The final part of the song “I’m dead inside because of you” that’s me trying to state that this fella is dead inside because of life, not Joan. I hope that makes sense.
I HUNG MY HEAD,
I’M SUCH A SORE LOSER,
I SAW MYSELF,
SO LONESOME AND VERY TIRESOME,
OH WHY, OH WHY, OH WHY, OH WHY, OH JOAN,
WHY ARE YOU AIMING THAT GUN, AT MY CHEST,
BECAUSE OH JOHNNY YOU SHOULD BE FEELING WARM LIKE THE SUN OUTSIDE,
BUT DARLING OH DARLING NO, IF YOU KNEW IM DEAD INSIDE BECAUSE OF YOU,
This is just a rough snippet on the version I really hope you guys enjoy my progression and creations. Until next time.