Hello guys, just another update on my song ‘Dead Man Walking’ I personally think that it is nearly done to move to the finale versions of recordings but, still trying to achieve the classic lo-fi folk country genre. “I hope you do appreciate my songwriting and the way I capture the first verse. My main inspiration comes from artist like Johnny Cash, Bob Dylan, Ray Lamontagne, Dolly Parton and Laura Marling and the 50s, 60s music.” I hope you can see my execution within my distinctiveness.
Hello guys, continuing within my new song ‘Dead Man Walking’. I’m going to show of some ideas of my chorus the main message of my song. I wanted to tell a dark narration that the metaphor or the main idea was to express a scene that this person the ‘Cowboy’ is feeling dead ‘INSIDE’ that he just walks and continues with his life just feeling dead inside happily welcoming death. I also wanted to capture a western country desert vibe by using ‘Vultures’ to capture that scene of expressiveness.
I’M A DEAD MAN WALKING,
PLEASE MOVE ASIDE,
I’M COMING THROUGH IN MY OPEN COFFIN,
DUMPED DOWN IN MY MUDDY GRAVE,
BUT, THE BUGS ARE HERE TO STAY,
AND LOOK AT THE VULTURES THEIR FLYING HIGH,
ARE TARGETING ARE THEIR PREY,
THEIR WILL HAVE A WONDERFUL FEAST TODAY,
Here is just a little snippet of my emotions. I really do hope you guys enjoy my creativity my main inspirations were the classic old recording sounding like Hank Williams, Johnny Cash and Bob Dylan etc. It’s still not perfect but, I really enjoyed singing this.
Hello, guys just another update on my new song I’m writing. ‘Dead Man Walking’ I really hoped you loved the first post I did for this song. Now, the second part aka the verse two. When I wanted to write this part I wanted to capture life as a metaphor but, within a scenario of characters. For example, when I say “Oh, Joan” She is the representation of people or a person who I experienced who will judge you and not believe in your circumstances. And when I say “You should be feeling warm like the sun outside” I’m trying to say that sometimes life doesn’t understand why a person can suffer from anxiety or mental health frustrating and forcing the character to be okay. The final part of the song “I’m dead inside because of you” that’s me trying to state that this fella is dead inside because of life, not Joan. I hope that makes sense.
I HUNG MY HEAD,
I’M SUCH A SORE LOSER,
I SAW MYSELF,
SO LONESOME AND VERY TIRESOME,
OH WHY, OH WHY, OH WHY, OH WHY, OH JOAN,
WHY ARE YOU AIMING THAT GUN, AT MY CHEST,
BECAUSE OH JOHNNY YOU SHOULD BE FEELING WARM LIKE THE SUN OUTSIDE,
BUT DARLING OH DARLING NO, IF YOU KNEW IM DEAD INSIDE BECAUSE OF YOU,
This is just a rough snippet on the version I really hope you guys enjoy my progression and creations. Until next time.
Hello guys, finally updating with some new lyrics material and also some snippet on the progression of my song.
Firstly my new song that I’m writing it’s called ‘Dead Man Walking’ it’s yet another dark song of mine it’s personal at some level I try and express some emotions that is mine, but I did get inspired by the stories of the old country music. This song I’m writing is about feeling dead inside every day that the narrative is about seeking something maybe peace? or forgiveness or to be at peace it’s a metaphor of life depression and etc. The main character is a cowboy going through hell and dirt just to get to his goal.
AND THIS COWBOY TREMBLES THROUGH A THORN BUSH,
FELL FROM THE CROSS,
HEAD FACED DOWN IN THE DIRT,
FLIRTING WITH THE SOIL,
NO ONE WILL EVER KNOW HIS TUMOIL,
BLOOD STAIN ON BOTH OF HIS HANDS,
I ONCE WAS A YOUNG FOOLISH LAD,
I’M HERE ON THE FLOOR,
THE TEARS THAT I DRIED,
THIS COWBOY CRIED,
I also did a snippet just recently. Just you guys can get an idea of my executions. Truly at beginning stages.
Hello, guys, this is an update of an acoustic singing session based on my song ‘One Day’. I really hope you guys like, comment and subscribe!
Now moving on to a new song it’s called ‘One Day’ when I write a song I try and capture other narrations that inspire me through life but I never wrote a song that is personal to me or has something in my heart that I would love to write a song about. So I feel it’s time to write something so deep and what I loved dearly.
So ‘One day’ is a song that I’m currently writing it’s is a day that you experience in your life and you hold dearly within your heart and maybe one day you will experience that day once more. I wanted to write this on a personal level about a day and time that I hold dearly and will cherish for the rest of my life. It was once day. So here is the first part of the lyrics!
So here is the first part of the lyrics!
WE WILL FOLLOW THE RAILWAY,
BUT TODAY WE CAN NOT AFFORD THE TRAIN TICKET, SO,
US THREE MUSKETEERS,
WILL SLEEP UNDER THE TREES TONIGHT,
AND LISTEN AND HEAR TO OH, MAMA, OH, MAMA, UNTOLD STORIES WHICH WE BOTH LOVE,
It’s was one day when I and my twin brother and my mom decided to go out for the day it was that day when my mom knew that I and my brother were nervous to go into school.
I’m showing you guys some snippets but remember these are just breaking the ice to get the feel of the song.
THE MORNING LIGHT,
WE STARTED TO WALK IN AN OPEN FIELD,
TRYING TO GET RID OF THE DEVIL OH DEVIL(X2) DUST IN OUR EYES,
THEN OH MAMA, OH MAMA, OH MAMA, SHE STARTS SINGING A CHRISTMAS SONG,
IN THE MIDDLE OF THE SUMMER,
THEN TOMMAROW WE ARE DANCING FOR MILES,
WE ARE THE RAILWAY CHILDREN,
AND WE ARE GOING TO BE REBELS AND STAY,
UP ALL NIGHT, AND HAVE A PICKNICK ON TOP OF THE WORLD,
TOP OF THE HILLSIDE, TOP OF THE HILLSIDE,
We didn’t have a lot of money so mama created a picknick and we made a whole day late at night trying to follow the railway along the countryside and listen to mama childhood stories. And then we decide to be rebels and sit on a hill that we both know dear it felt like the top of the world watching the world go by and the stars fade. Them days and especially that day was a memory that I will never forget! so the meaning of this song is that ‘One day’ you will relive your cherish memory and well for me I will follow the railway!