Hello, guys just a quick update just to let you know on my progress on my song. I want this song to be very dark and inspirational. So the second verse is about the story that she killed her man it was either her life or his. Remember these are just mock ups! because I need to feel the story just to make it right.
SHE GUNNED DOWN THE BEAST,
SHE TOOK THE COURAGE FINALLY,
HER HOMETOWN BANISHED, HER,
NOW SHE IS RUNNING INTO THE FOREST,
OUT OF BREATH,
GETTING CHASED BY THE DEAD MAN AND THE DEATH THAT STALKS HER,
And these are just some ideas of the chorus! The chorus is the part she is down by the riverside praying to god for mercy and forgiveness that she had to kill the demon that was haunting her.
SHE IS DOWN BY THE RIVER,
DOWN BY THE RIVERSIDE,
WASHING HER HANDS,
SHE TURN THE RIVER INTO THE PUREST OF RED,
COME INTO THE WATER MY DAUGHTER,