Lyric rec #2

Poor Jillian by Brendan.

{VERSE 2}

SHE PUTTING HER BLUE JEANS ON,
AND HER WHITE TANK T-SHIRT,
MOTHERS USED TO SAY TO THEIR CHILDREN,
DON’T SPEAK TO STRANGERS,

For  verse’s 1 and 2 it felt great to get the aftermath with Jillain just so I can get a feeling of sadness within her,  I also wanted to get a country vibe but a dark country song that people can follow her journey and see her mistakes.

{BRIDGE}

I SAW HER LAST RAMBLING ALONG THE ROAD,
I WISH I KNEW SHE WAS TROUBLE SOUL,
I THOUGH SHE WAS LONESOME,
THEN I SAW THE RED FELLA BY HER SIDE,
IT REALLY WASN’T GOOD FOR JILLIAN’S LIFE,

As for the bridge I wanted to go all out on this part but I used first person I wanted to get a feel that it was me or you as a listener seeing her by the devil’s side, and wishing that someone could help her but she’s lost within the red fellow who represented as the devil. I was trying so hard to make this song different and unique by using some words like “lonesome” and “red fellow” So I hope you guys really like my story so far?

{VERSE 3}

IT IS SAD THAT I HAVE TO TELL YOU THAT,
OH, JILLIAN IS DEAD,

As for the last and finale verse I want to get a atmosphere of no hope, no happy ending hence the name of the song “Poor Jillain

 

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Lyric rec #2

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